Tenth contents page draft

I added a caption under 'MCR REUNION???' as before it looked empty and like it didn't fit their.

Eighth DPS draft

I made the lines around my model more straight and made it look like she wasn't cut out in photoshop.

Sixth front cover draft

I swapped my puff and one of my sub images around as this looks better because their isn't too many other people around their eye level which make it easier to concentrate on them.

Seventh DPS draft

I made the title straighter so that it was more eye catching for the reader.

I moved the dominate image caption down so that made more sense and looked like it fitted better 

Ninth contents page draft

I made sure that the numbers were in line with the writing.
I added social media icons to the top of the page as social media is a big thing for fans in this age range for my magazine.
I added a white boarder around my model so that they stood out more on the page so it was more eye catching.

Eighth contents page draft

I tried adding a line to break up the two sides of the pages but it didn't look right and I think that it looks better without line.

Sixth DPS draft

I added a background to my image and tried it in a couple of different colours but I don't like it and I think that it looks better in black it fits well together when its all the same colour also alternative colours are black and dark colours so it fits my genre also my title and pull quote stand out more on the black background.

Seventh contents page

I added numbers to my sections that didn't have numbers.
I moved everything up so that it looked more full and interesting.
I changed the tours section slightly so that their is a space down the side of the page which is black as it looks better and more organized.

Fifth DPS cover

I changed my layout for my title and strap line as this looks more professional and looks more interesting.
I moved the rainbow to underneath the text to add some colour to the page and make it more interesting.
I make the running head just the title of my magazine and made it smaller.
I made my article text smaller as it was a little too big.
I made my sub image bigger as it looked better and filled up some more space.
I changed the font on the running head and bottom section of my DPS as this looks more professional.

Fifth front cover draft

I made my Monique sub image smaller as it was looking stretched.

I changed my other sub image as it was too small to see properly.

I moved the 'for' from my tag line as it looked like it was floating and didn't make sense.

I rotated my tag line so that it fitted better and looked more with the magazine.

I changed the diamond to a circle as it looked more professional. 

Sixth contents page draft.

I changed the image caption for my sub image so that it matches the dominant image caption.
I deleted the text under some of my sections as it didn't look right.
I added another section to my features to make it look more interesting.

Fifth Contents Page Draft

I added a background to my image as it looked like they were just floating their.
I changed the colour of the fonts  at the bottom of my article section as they didn't stand out well and this makes them the same I also removed the brackets as it didn't look right.
I moved the guest editor star to the other side and made the font smaller so everything fitted properly I also moved the signature to it was at the end of the writing.
I changed the big image caption so that it looked more professional and look better.
I also added a box for the second image caption so that it stood out.

Fourth DPS Draft

I embedded my drop cap into my article as to makes it look more professional.

Third DPS draft

I made the running head smaller.

I changed the title of the article as it didn't look right.

I moved my image caption with the image.

I changed the bylines to just one.

I moved one of the pull quotes so that it wouldn't be in the staple line.

I changed the image caption as it clashed with the sub title.  

Fourth front cover draft

I made my dominate image bigger.
I changed my sub image tag line.
I changed my sub image to another artist.
I changed the size of the barcode.
I changed the puff shape.
I made the bar at the bottom smaller.
I changed my tag line so it was shorter.

Fourth contents page draft

I added a box around my sub image.

I added boxes around my image captions.

I changed the image for dominate image.

I made the text for my guest editor straighter.

I changed my sub image so that it fits in with the text.

Second draft - DPS

I have added a title.

I have added a sub title.

I changed the size of my text.

I added photography credit.

I added boxes around my image captions.

I added a section at the bottom with the date, title of my magazine and my page number.

First draft DPS

This is my first draft of my double page spread. 

I added images. 

I added text. 

I added pull quotes.

I added a running head. 

I added a page number. 

I added captions to the images.

I added a byline. 

Third draft of my contents page

I added an image of my guest editor.

I added my sub images.

I added captions to my images.

I added a signature to my guest editor to make it more realistic. 

Second contents page draft

I added more sections to my contents page.

I added a box of where my sub image will be.

I changed my mind about the picture so I deleted it and placed a box where it should be.

I also added a guest editors note.

I added a star to make it stand out.